Appendix O(rdinary)
A setting lives in the details. Tell me that its characters are as human as I am. I want to know what they eat and how it's expelled. Give me a whole a chapter about someone shitting their guts out (don't). Give me the small things so the large grow and grow. Redwall by Brian Jacques is right at the top. Perfectly cosy until the rats the rats the rats. W hat someone eats, how they eat and where they get their food from are oh so important. See also Honoré de Balzac. Bring the white gooseberry wine! Fetch me some rosemary, thyme, beechnuts and honey, quickly. And now, friends, he squeaked, waving a dandelion wildly with his tail, I, Hugo, will create a Grayling a la Redwall such as will melt in the mouth of mice. Fresh cream! I need lots of fresh cream. Bring some mint leaves, too Moby Dick . Lots about the mundanities of sailing and whaling but here's a few lines about whale brains that I flipped to. In the case of a small Sperm Whale the brains are accounted a fine dish....